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Showing posts with label haiku attempts. Show all posts
Showing posts with label haiku attempts. Show all posts
Friday, November 25, 2011
Tuesday, October 5, 2010
Lovers for Rent
Under the sunshine they met as strangers
Words were hurled and hearts were broken.
Under the twilight, observed from afar
They held their hands and sighs closer
He took her by the mouth and gazed in her dreams
She grabbed his shoulder and held his desires
Each touch was calculated
Each stroke was measured
Every kiss drew blood
Every tear drew love
They gazed in the sky till azure was upon them
A final kiss was exchanged and they left each other
Under the sunshine they met as strangers
Words were hurled and hearts were kindled.
Thursday, June 7, 2007
Silos attempts haiku on request

These are more Haikus, but dealing with physical love and pain. I like Levertov's Ache, as I've said and this is just an attempt at something like that, just in terms of image and feeling.
[Icon be me]He entered her as she cried his name.
The lace fell off her body,
As he tore her patience.
The lace fell off her body,
As he tore her patience.
He entered her as she dripped blood.
She screamed in pain and agony.
She screamed in pain and agony.
They ceased to be.
Monday, May 28, 2007
Silos attempts haiku-s

I dont know how to define what I have composed. Is it a haiku? Is it a moku? Is it pseudo haiku? Is it a new form of fiction? Beneath are two of my early attempts. What I admire about haiku is what I found interesting about Hughes. Intense emotion condensed into minute lines...
Admirable. (my attempts may not be...)
The cockroach squeals.
Other species are terrified.
It sticks to my slippers.
Other species are terrified.
It sticks to my slippers.
The CD player stops.
The UPS turns on.
The banes of living in a city.
The UPS turns on.
The banes of living in a city.
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