These are more Haikus, but dealing with physical love and pain. I like Levertov's Ache, as I've said and this is just an attempt at something like that, just in terms of image and feeling.
[Icon be me]He entered her as she cried his name.
The lace fell off her body,
As he tore her patience.
The lace fell off her body,
As he tore her patience.
He entered her as she dripped blood.
She screamed in pain and agony.
She screamed in pain and agony.
They ceased to be.
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hey! thnx for the comment :)
tell me more about haiku...
written more stuff...chck it out and comment :D
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